my first email to make an order by offering backlink

Ini adalah sebuah email berisi iming-iming penawaran backlink website yang aku kirim ke beberapa alamat email online store (e-commerce target). Ini merupakan email yang aku buat untuk pertama kali dalam rangka menjalin komunikasi dan negosiasi dengan memberikan iming-iming berupa backlink ke website mereka, yang mana backlink ini bisa meningkatkan peringkat website e-commerce mereka di mesin pencari.

Dengan tulisan bahasa inggris yang belepotan dan modal dengkul, email-email ini menjadi ujung tombak dari aktifitas-aktifitas berikutnya sampai benar-benar menghasilkan barang, uang dan kesenangan bersama. Terima kasih untuk mbak Tiffany Viljevac atas ide dan inspirasinya!


from: mamak comcicomca <e*********s@yahoo.ca>
to: cs@c******h.com, info@p**********e.co.uk, customerservice@u****************y.com, info@s************e.com, info@e***********************e.com, email@a***********s.com
date: Jun 1, 2007, 8:32 PM
subject 1: make link… [optional] subject 2: assist to make an order… [optional] subject 3: confuse in making order… [optional]

dear friends,

i’ve browsing on your site, i think that nice site. may it will be my favorite skateboards website, but i got some confusing in language. i’m from indonesia and just knowing english. so, by this email i want ask you several things.

in my country, i’ve built my own skateboards shop. i named it e**********l skateboards shop. i’ve new website for my shop, the URL is www.e*********s.com and i want to offer you to advertise your website at my website. i can put a link banner or image at my website. please note, i’m just offer it to make your website more famous in my country and off course that made my site more traffic happen.

otherwise, for my e**********l skateboards shop, i got some question to you.
1. may i buy some stuff from your company?
2. can you arrange a shipment to my country, Indonesia?
3. what kind payment you company provide, are your company accept credit card payment?
4. if you can receive credit card payment, what type credit card you accept?

thank you for your attention!! hopefully you can send me email as soon as possible.

best regards,
Itonk D Joannou
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